 aorpete
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Date: April 30, 2008 @ 10:07 AM
Just been listening before I logged-on.
Very nice work here - a really strong rock ballad.
I like the way things build particularly when the drums come in.
There is definetly a magical-sparkle here & it does feel like this was written from the heart.
If there is one thing I would consider changing slightly - it would be the length of the song... it is fine as is but if it was shorter I feel it would appeal more to a larger audience making for more of a hit!
Great job though - well done.
 
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 ShadowMom
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Date: April 30, 2008 @ 4:42 PM
The magical sparkle Pete mentions? It's a smile. You sing smiles and gentle thoughts.   
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 miraclemaker
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Date: May 1, 2008 @ 12:33 AM
Very nice sound and melody 
A very catchy number, I enjoyed listening 
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GeneHilbert
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Date: May 1, 2008 @ 10:45 AM
Kewl tune..... Remix the vocals - bring them to the front of the mix. Especially when you're singing lower in your range. As well watch your diction and pitch, enunciate clearly and support your notes.
When you trail off you tend to drift flat. By using your lungs and diaphragm - you effectively project more air behind the notes, keeping them on pitch ....
Kewl Tune - Good Job
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farfor44
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Date: May 2, 2008 @ 1:03 AM
 the lyrics are outstanding!
great bit of songwriting and very good vocals If any adjustments are
made on the vocals,I'd add a little high end to to give a clearer soundbut
I think this is an outstanding song,written from the heart and delivered
in the same waythe music flows very well with everythinglove the pianodude! I love it!
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 ebarbarella
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Date: May 2, 2008 @ 10:02 AM
very nice song! lovely lyrics, a song to fall in love with ... nice guitar! yeah I love it! nice piano too!  playlisted!
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 Electronicla...
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Date: May 2, 2008 @ 10:39 AM
I'm with the others, but they are only minor details that need to be tightened up but other than that this is a beautiful track, such a beautiful vocal & lyrics, lovely musical arrangement
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moam
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Date: May 5, 2008 @ 8:03 AM
Just started...IT SUCKS!! 
Just kidding  No seriously, I already love the melody and the feel to the track Alright, the vocals started, great voice you have I would maybe turn up the volume a little bit on them though. When the drums come in as well, my personal opinion is that they should be louder. Nice solo at around 2:40 or so. Very beautiful piano at around 4 mins That was a really nice change up This track almost has like a weezer feel to it, with your vox and all. One other idea I had while listening, when I came to the end of the piano part, I expected the song to be done there. I feel that it would give the song more closure if you ended it at "no matter what happens we will be together". Either that, or if you have the guitar part in the end, maybe make that part longer, make it like a grand finale or something. Very nice work so far dude! I dig what you've done, just minor ideas or things I've noticed Keep up the good work
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Rodrica
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Date: May 6, 2008 @ 9:35 PM
I can feel the emotion in this track, the song is melodic and heartfelt. I think it's because the lyrics are so important that people are asking for a little more clarity in the vocals - just to make sure that we don't miss any of the words. I like the tone/timbre of your voice and it works perfectly for this kind of song.
There's no right or wrong length for a song - but it should be determined by what you intend to do with the song. For an album track, it can be longer and less "commercial". If you want to write stuff intended as more of a "single" for radio airplay etc, then it needs to be around the 4 minute mark, which is more or less the criteria laid down by radio stations/publishers.
Listening as a audience...I thought it was great - it definitely has something special about it.
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WM3
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Date: May 8, 2008 @ 7:08 AM
VERY COOL TUNE,GOOD SOLID VOCALS ORIGINAL?
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ShadowMom
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Date: May 9, 2008 @ 5:58 AM
You know, I really liked this the first time I heard it... but it's grown on me even more. It's becoming one of my favorites here, and it shows up on my radio playlist every day. 
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 Vickxxx
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Date: May 15, 2008 @ 6:13 AM
this track makes me feel good all over
Very nice performance on this memorable arrangement.
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philiphmusic
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Date: May 17, 2008 @ 4:19 AM
very nice. outstanding vocals and very original intro with the guitar
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BOWILLIE
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Date: May 22, 2008 @ 6:05 AM
very soothing and relaxing performance.
very nice work.
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